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Dyke Write - Celebrating creativity & diversity in lesbian and bisexual women :: Guests' Writing :: Guests' First Crush Stories :: Michelle Author Topic: Michelle (Read 656 times) FaithKarma New Member member is offline Joined: Feb 2003 Posts: 1 Michelle « Thread Started on Feb 23, 2003, 8:14pm » This is more of a ....what I DID.....what happend first crush story..and I would like advice if someone would give it to me! Painful rejection. There's this girl I know named Michelle,a beautiful red haired maiden.Her voice is angelic and she is nice.I was a friend of hers at one point and I wished so bad she'd go out with me,and I asked her.She turned me down.So for Valentines day I bought her a carebear,a necklace,and like 4 carnations.She hugged me and said 'Thanks',but it wasn't a short hug,it lasted kinda long.But I don't thinks she likes me ya know?(feedback on this please?)Now coming up is what I wish would have happend. Evil Friday It was a Friday,and the day before I had been talking about how I liked the angel known as Michelle to my best friend Chii Sakura,and she had pushed me to ask Michelle out,saying that if I didn't she would come up here and do it for me,so I agreed that I would.So I was walking down the hall to my 3rd period,and I saw her in the hallway and said ,'Michelle I need to talk to you at lunch' and she said Ok,and rushed off to class because the first bell had rung.So I turned and walked about 3 doors down to my class,feeling very nervous already.By fifth period I was a nervous wreck,my hands were shaking and I was playing many different reactions in my head,when my lunch time rolled around I went out and walked about a door down to Michelle's room to wait for her to come out,we have the same lunch period,and are classes are like right next to each other. She looks to me smiles,walking over she hugs me briefly and pulls away,"Okay so what is it you wanted to talk to me about?" slightly curious she just looks at me,I look at her then back toward the snow covered outside,shaking my head."Oh,no your telling me now..I've waited all day...your gonna tell me." I shook my head again."Oh come on please?" she pouts at me and I break. "Okay...I ...well...Ya know how I told you that ya know,I could treat you better than anyone else right?"She nods and still stares at me. "Well..I....ermmm.....too nervous" I look away,and almost trip on the snow.She smiles as if knowing what I was gonna say. "You wanted to ask me out right?",I look at her wide eyed and nod,"Well the answers no" I get a very hurt look and glance away."I say no to everyone",thats why she ask my best friend out right...(not Chii..Brad)...I nod,and branch away from her and walk over to Kendra's table,sitting doww,no one was there today so I sat alone.Eating my lunch quietly,and then rushing off to gym class.Then after a fun gym class I went to study hall and talked to Brad,telling him everything I knew about Michelle,he did ask after all.But then when I went home,life became even more miserable thanks to my wonderful mother... Valentines Day There is suppose to be a pep rally today,I kept thinking,i'll sit by her and talk to her.Every class was cut short but like ten minutes to make time for the pep rally,except for fifth because of lunches.So I went threw every class pretty routinely,until fourth period.Willie pissed off Frau Dambraskus again,she made us all switch seats,like a seat away from the one we were just in?!It makes no sense,then they annoucned that due to the snow storm coming up,we'd be let out an hour early,and also that there was no pep rally.I got so pissed off.I sulked off the fifth period and listened to Ms.McCarthy blubber on,about nothingness.I got a C in that class and all I do is space and not talk,she is after all,Ms.Clumsy-losing papers Lady.I looked at the clock and it was 12:27pm,I smiled and packed my stuff.One minute till the bell ring,and when it did I was the first out the door,walking over to Michelle's classroom so Her,Fearless Heather (long story) and me could walk down to lunch together like we always do.So when we reached the lunchroom,Shannon nearly killed me,and pouted asking me to get her outta class,cause her teacher believed I was an aide due to the factor I had been there so many times to get Ashley outta class. So I agreed,and ran into the lunch room and got money from my mom,a 10 dollar bill.I then made a deal with Shannon,that I'd get her outta class if she would deliver the four carnations I bought Michelle to her table and tell her they were from me,she agreed.I then sprinted up to Storck and got Shannon's stuff coming up with a clever lie that she fell and hit her head on the ice.Then I walked down to the lunch room handed Shannon her stuff,and walked over to Michelles table.I glanced and made sure she got the flowers,she did.(hoping-ness is coming up soon) She hugged me tightly,and whispered 'Thanks' into my ear.I smiled,and blushed abit.Later that day I ask her to call me,she said she would,because I was gonna ask her out Sunday.(Sunday is today by the way). Well she never called me,I was hoping she'd call me,I'd ask her out,she'd say yes and it would all be good.I mean,yeah. 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